HEY great song!
hey this is a great song, i like your pads, and i like your kick. vox pads were cool!
there are a few things i noticed. first off the main high perc. needs to be equalized a little bit, take the high end off it so much so its not the main focus so much. the song had good atmosphere but i felt the bass was lacking some... effect attitude, it was funky but i think the way it sounded around 1:50 was good. around 1:35 it was a little difficult to tell the lead from the from the pads.
the way it ended really had great atmosphere, definitely had some imagery going on
good work